Try #2, throw in the dots. She likes the dots, but still says something's wrong...
Try #3, didn't like the "squares," so she likes it without them, but still doesn't like it...Someday I shall conquer this project.
I did this one a while ago, thoroughly proud of the great new logo, the typography, the color scheme. I sent it to my dad and...rejected! He said there's no color! I didn't want there to be much color, I thought the nice cold business scheme was gonna work out...It's still my favorite, but I also like my last header.